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posted Jan 18, 2018

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Jan 18, 2018

Maxis-Geryon

The apocalypse through her eyes...

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Jan 18, 2018

Proxy170

I love how in your story, you've told us enough to generally understand the world, but then rather than throwing an exposition at us, you've teased us and made us want to hear/ask for the back story, so when it's time to tell it we're eagerly zoomed in. Awesome job :)

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Jan 18, 2018

Maxis-Geryon

Why thank you!

The trick about giving information in a story, its best that you let your audience learn it through a character's experiences. Doesn't mean infodumps are completely bad however. There are times it becomes necessary.

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